tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5111102226134482925.post8993113616597405293..comments2008-08-23T16:52:10.953-05:00Comments on Star Trek Fiction: OMF - Attack part 4That Writerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07816758298098242191noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5111102226134482925.post-83430416435730708742008-06-22T15:14:00.000-05:002008-06-22T15:14:00.000-05:00No problem! I'm always glad when people catch my ...No problem! I'm always glad when people catch my typos and whatnot when I post; it definitely helps. It's hard to catch those things when you wrote the story because half of it's so memorized that you unconsciously fill in your words in your mind and not read them.<BR/><BR/>Anyway, though, glad to help!<BR/><BR/>-SteffUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433927625772711387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5111102226134482925.post-25668778655215668722008-06-22T11:58:00.000-05:002008-06-22T11:58:00.000-05:00Slwatson,Thank you so much for the input. I have ...Slwatson,<BR/>Thank you so much for the input. I have made the corrections above. Sometimes I get in too much of a hurry to post and should take time review stuff before it goes up. Again, thank you for your comments, time, and pointers. I really do appreciate it!That Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07816758298098242191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5111102226134482925.post-17050376829031302062008-06-22T09:44:00.000-05:002008-06-22T09:44:00.000-05:00I'd be having a mild freakout if I were Scott, by ...I'd be having a mild freakout if I were Scott, by that point. Or, maybe slap Data around a little. "Mind the condescension!" But it was a fun read; I'm looking forward to seeing the next part!<BR/><BR/>My only concerns are a few typos; your spell-check replaced 'Spock' with 'Spoke' -- don't feel bad, mine tries that too. Just add his name to the user dictionary. And a could other minor things:<BR/><BR/><I>He noticed two readings that indicated the exhaust of the ship and the bled off of a power supply somewhere on deck twelve.</I><BR/><BR/>Bleed, instead of bled.<BR/><BR/>Nanos without an apostrophe, as it's a plural and not a possessive. And...<BR/><BR/><I>”Admiral. the Borg have scanned the Enterprise and are changing their heading to an intercept course.“ A blond women, smiled slightly and returned her attention to her station.</I><BR/><BR/>"Admiral, the Borg have scanned the Enterprise and are changing their heading to an intercept course," a blond woman said, smiling slightly before she returned to her station.<BR/><BR/>But other than those minor quibbles, it was an enjoyable chapter and you left me thoroughly looking forward to seeing what happens next! Nice job!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433927625772711387noreply@blogger.com